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Time For a Change

Borrowed Poetry

Sat May 30, 2009, 9:14 AM
Someone who will remain anonymous wrote this. I stole it with permission. I just love the raw talent and can see so much potential in future writing. The novelty of it is the innocence that bleeds through.




what could be




how do you describe something close but far?

would it be a butterfly that slips through your grasp?

would it be an ever entagling glance that can't be returned

or an ever so slight kiss when no ones around that pricks the soul if it continues

when a wind blows the the hair of a loved one and leaves a scent that is forever recollected?

do you know when you see it?

a dazzling dance of light that encumbers you when it hits the hue of her hair

that can only pull you deeper in the abyss with a relenting pull that reminds you of gravity.

i challege you to inhabit your thoughts to gain that semblence that once exhisted

the one that made you escape reality to imagine that first kiss that did not feel like a thousand others.

why is what could be a symbol of what should or shouldn't?

long lasting feelings shouldn't be wasted but cherished in that chamber that may require recessitation

enjoy the many moments that are spent in dubious places

moments may lead to reconsideration that nullify the attempt at what could be.

  • Mood: Unhappy
  • Listening to: Children playing from my porch
  • Reading: poetry of lost souls
  • Watching: the flies attacking my flowers
  • Playing: wtf am i going to do today?
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: Diet Dr. Pepper

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  • Current Residence: Barbie Dream Mansion
  • Interests: poetry, shoes,breaking hearts
  • Favourite movie: Lost in Translation,Kill Bill
  • Favourite band or musician: Dashboard Confessional
  • Favourite genre of music: emo or alternative
  • Favourite artist: Renoir, Klumt
  • Favourite poet or writer: Poe, SalingerRice
  • Skin of choice: soft but moderately hairy....
  • Favourite game: do mind games count?
  • Favourite gaming platform: frontal lobes?
  • Favourite cartoon character: Johnny Bravo, Ren and Stimpy, Cow and chicken
  • Personal Quote: You cant afford me!
  • Tools of the Trade: Microsoft Word and my Big Mouth

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Comments


:iconlady-assanka:
jus thought i would drop you a line and see how things were goin for you! take care

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if you never hold on to anything in life, keep your word and your respect because that alone will make you a better person
:iconjlmoney:
happy bithday.

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Life has an ironic way of reiterating that absolutely nothing is permanent...
:iconlostserenity:
Thanks. It was a really good day. I can't believe I'm 36. Dammit.

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Someone called me a bitch. I said, " Good you get it then"
:iconjlmoney:
if it makes you feel better, i'm turning 25.

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Life has an ironic way of reiterating that absolutely nothing is permanent...
:iconlostserenity:
Not for another 7 mos. Thats means your'e not even 24 1/2 yet lol. Try having a kids who are taller than you, and a junior in high school.
OR the other one 5'1 and 105 lbs turning 11 and wears a bra. She just weighs 25 under than me. Now thats getting old.

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Someone called me a bitch. I said, " Good you get it then"
:iconsoundedmind:
Thank ya bunches :D

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There once was a wise man who said live your life to the fullest.... but he's dead now.
:iconszelenbaum:
hi there, random deviant :wave:

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:iconeloha-ulysses:
I miss you, I need you in my life again. How are you?

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The moment is not THIS moment without our perception of being unique to it.
:iconxmurder0ticax:
hey thanks for the :+fav: !!

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